04-08-2013, 02:56 AM
hi popeye,
every time I read this it's still just as lovely and damming. ;p with this poem I feel like you're very successfully walking a thin line. thanks for sharing.
I agree with Heart's suggestion for the last line, and can't really think of anything else to improve it. there isn't much to work with, and it's already top quality. just wanted to say well done. =]
-cloudy
every time I read this it's still just as lovely and damming. ;p with this poem I feel like you're very successfully walking a thin line. thanks for sharing.
I agree with Heart's suggestion for the last line, and can't really think of anything else to improve it. there isn't much to work with, and it's already top quality. just wanted to say well done. =]
-cloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.