Aubade

[Heartafire]

Alba Aubade

Dawn breeze stirs
Hasty murmured departure
Brushing burrs
Hurrying through damp pasture

Cuckoo sings
And heralds adultery

Hi Popeye, I love this very much, it is so subtle yet deep in it's secret. Love the title you have chosen. I think I might drop "and"
in the final line and use "heralding adultery". Fine writing.
Best,
Heart