04-08-2013, 01:10 AM
Hi rowens,
I like much of your writing...I admit that sometimes i struggle to find a path through the ideas, but often this does not matter.
You make frequent mention to the chaos in your mind and phisical life, yet I find that recently your poems are becomming ever clearer and brighter events on the page before my eyes. A coalescing of thought and word that at times is just sublime. Whatever it is you are doing to facilitate producing a poem...I think it is working.
Did I mention that I like this poem?
AJ.
I like much of your writing...I admit that sometimes i struggle to find a path through the ideas, but often this does not matter.
You make frequent mention to the chaos in your mind and phisical life, yet I find that recently your poems are becomming ever clearer and brighter events on the page before my eyes. A coalescing of thought and word that at times is just sublime. Whatever it is you are doing to facilitate producing a poem...I think it is working.
Did I mention that I like this poem?
AJ.