Red Spider
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Hi trueenigma and PoetryAndPhysics, thank you for reading and your helpful comments. True, I will see what can be done to add more image to this piece, darkness of course is a metaphor for sadness or melancholy. Thank you for the pointers. PoetryAndPhysics, I will lift "light" up to the line above, I feel you are right regarding that. Thank you both for the kind words and I will take your advice under consideration, Poetry, I believe dendrites can become tangled , I think disorderly seems even more likely.
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Red Spider - by Heartafire - 03-28-2013, 12:14 AM
RE: Red Spider - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 01:56 AM
RE: Red Spider - by Heartafire - 03-28-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: Red Spider - by serge gurkski - 03-29-2013, 12:42 AM
RE: Red Spider - by justcloudy - 03-29-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: Red Spider - by milo - 03-29-2013, 09:27 AM
RE: Red Spider - by Heartafire - 04-03-2013, 09:05 AM
RE: Red Spider - by trueenigma - 04-05-2013, 01:10 PM
RE: Red Spider - by PoetryAndPhysics - 04-07-2013, 07:17 AM
RE: Red Spider - by Heartafire - 04-08-2013, 01:06 AM
RE: Red Spider - by tectak - 04-09-2013, 07:37 PM
RE: Red Spider - by Heartafire - 04-10-2013, 02:42 AM



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