04-07-2013, 08:08 AM
the first one I posted a month ago or so. see here . now here's my rewrite.
Wrapped inside out I wander in
and if I’m lucky, can observe
my floating, glinting, golden soul
diving into pumping heart,
with my brain still in its clutches,
reaching down, transforming.
Intimately, liltingly, it happens.
A process small beyond my knowledge
too intricate for comprehension,
shifting to the realm of the people of the quarks.
They shiver and it shakes the world.
Fourth dimensional inhabitants of our circled existence,
infinitely larger than the titans of our minds.
With wagging fingers they decide
we are too cold, we have been lost
so their tiny hands press
human-sized slices of the world’s communal Soul
into those with open bodies.
With their otherness they border-hop
between spiritual and temporal.
My eyes linger shut,
but I have seen.
Wrapped inside out I wander in
and if I’m lucky, can observe
my floating, glinting, golden soul
diving into pumping heart,
with my brain still in its clutches,
reaching down, transforming.
Intimately, liltingly, it happens.
A process small beyond my knowledge
too intricate for comprehension,
shifting to the realm of the people of the quarks.
They shiver and it shakes the world.
Fourth dimensional inhabitants of our circled existence,
infinitely larger than the titans of our minds.
With wagging fingers they decide
we are too cold, we have been lost
so their tiny hands press
human-sized slices of the world’s communal Soul
into those with open bodies.
With their otherness they border-hop
between spiritual and temporal.
My eyes linger shut,
but I have seen.