Pocklington
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Thank you for your comments Crepuscule. I see what you mean about it being disjointed. I'll try to work on that in future poems.
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Pocklington - by cantab - 04-06-2013, 12:46 AM
RE: Pocklington - by Crepuscule - 04-07-2013, 01:45 AM
RE: Pocklington - by cantab - 04-07-2013, 02:31 AM



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