Growing Up
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I need to go read chapter ten of that book, I forgot what goes on there.

If you don't want punctuation, that's all right.

The only thing I thought about for constructive criticism is taking "same" out of the second line. Just to see if it sounds better that way.
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Growing Up - by Sanger - 04-06-2013, 01:21 PM
RE: Growing Up - by rowens - 04-07-2013, 12:01 AM
RE: Growing Up - by Sanger - 04-07-2013, 12:19 AM
RE: Growing Up - by rowens - 04-07-2013, 12:31 AM



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