04-05-2013, 08:38 PM
For milo
Thank you so much for your precious comments milo, I will surely try to imbibe them. I had tried to create a subtle turn here but guess it was a bit too subtle
I had tried to start with a normal bride and then gradually show the reader that she is not young any more, she is old and spent now.
Thanks once again for all the help.
The NaPM is keeping me quite busy
For billy
Thank you so much for your precious comments, billy.
yes I have seen one of your triolets and I remember the use of punctuation to alter the meaning, that was a great trick, I must say. The da/dum da/dum will need some more practice on my part. Thanks once again
Thank you so much for your precious comments milo, I will surely try to imbibe them. I had tried to create a subtle turn here but guess it was a bit too subtle
I had tried to start with a normal bride and then gradually show the reader that she is not young any more, she is old and spent now.
Thanks once again for all the help.
The NaPM is keeping me quite busy
For billy
Thank you so much for your precious comments, billy.
yes I have seen one of your triolets and I remember the use of punctuation to alter the meaning, that was a great trick, I must say. The da/dum da/dum will need some more practice on my part. Thanks once again
~Neena