04-05-2013, 01:10 PM
I would keep dendrites, hell you did more than just give us a pretty poem, people are looking up words and improving their vocabulary!
The only problem for me is there all this talk of dark and light but I can't actually SEE the dark and light. What's dark, what's light? What do they look like? Give me a night and day. Is the light yellow and the dark blue? I wanna know, please tell me in the poem.
The only problem for me is there all this talk of dark and light but I can't actually SEE the dark and light. What's dark, what's light? What do they look like? Give me a night and day. Is the light yellow and the dark blue? I wanna know, please tell me in the poem.