Poem about hurting someone you love
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I enjoyed reading it. However I'm a bit confused about the line "but mistakes scare it away". is "it" referring to loneliness ...that claws at your heart?
The rest of if is good, especially the last phrase.
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Poem about hurting someone you love - by guitargirl37 - 04-02-2013, 12:20 PM
RE: Poem about hurting someone you love - by alannaeileen - 04-04-2013, 12:03 PM
RE: Poem about hurting someone you love - by 2onthemap - 04-05-2013, 10:13 AM
RE: Poem about hurting someone you love - by Searchin4happyness - 04-05-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: Poem about hurting someone you love - by Kayleeann - 04-09-2013, 04:27 AM



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