04-05-2013, 07:29 AM
I think this poem could really benefit from keeping up the lords prayer throughout - you abandon it for no good reason after the first stanza.
But I can definitely feel your emotions are in this poem, and that is a good thing.
But I can definitely feel your emotions are in this poem, and that is a good thing.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)