The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet)

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The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet)

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04-04-2013, 05:47 PM

(04-02-2013, 10:55 PM)serge gurkski Wrote: I like that.
it is to the point.
it reminds of some oriental word artistry.

cheers
Serge

I am glad you liked it Smile

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(04-03-2013, 02:07 AM)Volaticus Wrote: I really like it. Strong lines. And enjoyable to read

Thank you so much Smile

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~Neena

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The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by neena2504 - 04-02-2013, 08:21 PM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by UnicornRainbowCake - 04-02-2013, 08:32 PM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by neena2504 - 04-02-2013, 09:30 PM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by serge gurkski - 04-02-2013, 10:55 PM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by neena2504 - 04-04-2013, 05:47 PM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by Volaticus - 04-03-2013, 02:07 AM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by milo - 04-04-2013, 07:49 PM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by neena2504 - 04-05-2013, 08:38 PM

RE: The bride of Chenab (My first Triolet) - by billy - 04-05-2013, 09:54 AM

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