Swing apocalypso

[NakedBear]

i must recite it . prob, my pc's soundcard as halfway died.

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Hey! everyone:


should i rather go for


swingING apocalypso?

Those lines where you put letters in brackets, they're interesting, although they give me a hard time when trying to speak this poem. This speaking problem doesn't rob them of an intellectual pleasure in deciphering them, though.

No to the ING, I think. What would it add? But since this style is so far outside my own area, my opinion may not mean much.

Oh well. Definitely an interesting read.

Mikey.