Unreliable Narrator

Unreliable Narrator

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04-04-2013, 07:19 AM

Very concise, I like it... but it does lack the uncertainty of the first version so the title is not quite fitting now. I like the title, so my suggestion would be to put in just one more contradiction.

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Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-02-2013, 06:07 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by serge gurkski - 04-02-2013, 07:36 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-02-2013, 09:55 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by Leanne - 04-02-2013, 10:41 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-04-2013, 07:14 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-02-2013, 11:02 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by Leanne - 04-04-2013, 07:19 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-04-2013, 07:26 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by Leanne - 04-04-2013, 07:35 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-04-2013, 07:37 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by Leanne - 04-04-2013, 07:45 AM

RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-04-2013, 09:02 AM

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