04-03-2013, 10:50 PM
I basically used Poe's format of "The Raven" and went with 6 syllables instead of 8.
So it sounds like this:
xxxxxAxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxCxxxxxC
xxxxxCxxxxxB
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxB
"The Raven" would be:
xxxxxxxAxxxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxB
and so on.
It's the first time I used a format to make the beat precise.
![[Image: dfsqx.jpg]](http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/6277/dfsqx.jpg)
So I sort of cheated
Thank you for the critique.
So it sounds like this:
xxxxxAxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxCxxxxxC
xxxxxCxxxxxB
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxB
"The Raven" would be:
xxxxxxxAxxxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxB
and so on.
It's the first time I used a format to make the beat precise.
![[Image: dfsqx.jpg]](http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/6277/dfsqx.jpg)
So I sort of cheated

Thank you for the critique.
