Something, something, dark side
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I basically used Poe's format of "The Raven" and went with 6 syllables instead of 8.

So it sounds like this:
xxxxxAxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxCxxxxxC
xxxxxCxxxxxB
xxxxxxxxxxxB
xxxxxB

"The Raven" would be:
xxxxxxxAxxxxxxxA
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxB
and so on.

It's the first time I used a format to make the beat precise.

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So I sort of cheated Tongue

Thank you for the critique.
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Something, something, dark side - by Regn - 04-03-2013, 08:43 PM
RE: Something, something, dark side - by Regn - 04-03-2013, 10:50 PM
RE: Something, something, dark side - by Leanne - 04-04-2013, 03:23 AM
RE: Something, something, dark side - by Regn - 04-04-2013, 08:44 AM



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