Blinded

[Truerenigma]

This is far too generalized for me. You could be talking about anything.

I have to respectfully state that I don't understand where you are coming. I feel it poses the question that forces that are obvious are what we neglect to see because they go over our heads. We are blinded by them because we simply don't acknowledge them. There is also room for interpretation with this piece so their isn't a single meaning or message behind. That was the idea of the poem. Not to label one exact thing. I wanted it so anyone who read could define in their own way. I didn't want to be specific.

That's fine. I'm not saying it's a bad poem, it obviously accomplished what you intended. Just not my taste. As far as leaving room for interpretation, I couldn't find anything to interpret. Perhaps my imagination needs some more exercise. Anyway.. I'm sure plenty of others will enjoy it just fine.