04-02-2013, 08:30 PM
The emotion is beautiful, the piece is written nicely except a few places like: (I agree with Amy here)
that feel is just a privilege of few
that was caused by that color blue,
Last 4 lines are really good.
Cheers
that feel is just a privilege of few
that was caused by that color blue,
Last 4 lines are really good.
Cheers
~Neena