pint-sized prisoner

[catdog]

I like the crammed feeling of some of the lines, the care it takes to read and understand gives more power to the words. "Sharp astringent pinches nose" and "panic belly button pressed" were probably my favorite portions linguistically, but I found myself wanting to hear more of those types of sounds following and was disapointed at a return to more conventional/dry lines. Nice poem overall though, a little sad for my taste but seemingly appropriate for a 'justcloudy.'