04-02-2013, 10:41 AM
Love the concept and the doubt/ deliberate deception of the narrator -- my only suggestion would be that "hurts" might not be the best word, seems a bit wishy washy for such a short piece.
It could be worse
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Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-02-2013, 06:07 AM
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RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-02-2013, 09:55 AM
RE: Unreliable Narrator - by Leanne - 04-02-2013, 10:41 AM
RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-04-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-02-2013, 11:02 AM
RE: Unreliable Narrator - by Leanne - 04-04-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-04-2013, 07:26 AM
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RE: Unreliable Narrator - by newsclippings - 04-04-2013, 07:37 AM
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