04-02-2013, 02:16 AM
the edited, italicized, bolded version is nice, reads like an ancient man's story...
roman province works well...
the cowboy title doesn't seem to fit, as most of this reeks of the MENA desert...
"I so unpoetically procrastinate
and hate to have mirrored
back to me
my own ugly fate-face.
Nothing to be proud about.
(But that's a lie: I was brilliant at times)." ---> not the core but definitely my favorite (I guess because I can relate?)
roman province works well...
the cowboy title doesn't seem to fit, as most of this reeks of the MENA desert...
"I so unpoetically procrastinate
and hate to have mirrored
back to me
my own ugly fate-face.
Nothing to be proud about.
(But that's a lie: I was brilliant at times)." ---> not the core but definitely my favorite (I guess because I can relate?)
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.