the incident

[serge gurkski]

I fell down last night on my way to the kitchen
I made noise wishing it had been louder
alarmig my neighbours. alarming
You know: Just to notify to them that I am still alive.
Some bullshit like that. would it work better as Or some bullshit like that.

Bt then I was ,let us say halfway-through drunk, by or but? comma next to the word,
and my logics, given I am in that state of. ha! logic
Inebriateditty differ from my sober reasoning (ever so not unexpectedly) much. the weird wordage works cos it's presumably a drunk 1st person. struggled with inebria.... but enjoyed that i did.

If you know what I am saying here.

If you follow my reasoning.

If you want to make sense of what I was just telling you above.



But why?

(why not?)

i think the concept of a drunk writing a poem (whether real or fictional is done well enough. i mention the spelling simply because it's wrong, if it's done to add drunken ambience, it would work. but it isn't writ by a drunk because you were drunk the night before, so spelling needs sorting.
one problem that arises is were you half drunk last night or full drunk now if not the latter the weird wordage doesn't work as well as i though

;-) thanks to both of you, Lewis and Billy.
"one problem that arises is were you half drunk last night or full drunk now " hahaha.