04-01-2013, 01:56 PM
(03-31-2013, 09:38 PM)justcloudy Wrote: I have no critiques, (I'm even not sure you're really looking for critiques here ;D ) but just wanted to say this felt amazing to read... felt like absolutely honest mind-vomit. I have this thing where I can't really think things through unless I write about them, and this piece looks a lot like that. Meaning, critiquing it is useless, unnecessary and dishonest. So lovely lovely.yes I do. I appreciate any kind of input. I just want to ask everyone commenting to have patience with me if I do not return to their comments immediately.
PS I guess one tiny thing... I live in Africa and if you say Africa's holy hero I think of Mohammed, not Jesus. ;p
I am only by now seeing the plot of this emerge.
(03-31-2013, 09:38 PM)justcloudy Wrote: I have no critiques, (I'm even not sure you're really looking for critiques here ;D ) but just wanted to say this felt amazing to read... felt like absolutely honest mind-vomit. I have this thing where I can't really think things through unless I write about them, and this piece looks a lot like that. Meaning, critiquing it is useless, unnecessary and dishonest. So lovely lovely.
PS I guess one tiny thing... I live in Africa and if you say Africa's holy hero I think of Mohammed, not Jesus. ;p
yes, I understand your point but '(it is not relevant for my plot) Nigeria and Sudan /Now 2 states of course) have 2 holy heros: Christ in the North, Mohammed in the South. But as I said; irrelevant. This is much too recent for my story. I just follow these developments out of interest.
Only the gnostic aspect of Islam is relevant for my plot.