04-01-2013, 05:53 AM
I don't get the last line - I won't do what? I like the impact of it's shortness, but the last line lets it down with the unclearness of what you won't do. Perhaps expand it on another line, something that would really round it off nicely.
- Amy
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)
(You wouldn't be surprised to know my parents did not christen me UnicornRainbowCake.)