Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon
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Todd: That reads like a love poem, except not really. It's kind of abstract as well, and I actually enjoy that.

trueenigma: Hi! =) Yeah, I know the pieces I post here are really bad as of late. Hopefully after some tweaks and fixes, maybe even overhauls, they'll be better. That will come after the game though.

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He lived in a cloud.
He saw the good, the bad, and the ugly,
but he didn’t judge.
He just felt and indulged
in whatever magic occurring inside him
until he’s old.

What he observed,
was a grander design
and beings not realizing that,
blissful, beautiful in their own ways.

What he heard,
was ceaseless cacophony
taking on different forms
even in silence.

What he smelt,
was variety.
Some good, most bad,
but the good tends to stay with him more.

What he saw didn’t bother him much,
because he’s happy, and the emotion is real.
That’s enough for him.

What he heard was annoying,
but he got used to it,
and his hearing worsened anyway.

What he smelt let him remember,
especially the good ones.
So he takes in the scent wherever he goes.

What he felt, was
loneliness.
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Messages In This Thread
Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 02-24-2013, 11:45 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 02-25-2013, 08:41 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-03-2013, 01:56 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-04-2013, 03:59 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-04-2013, 10:01 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-05-2013, 01:38 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-06-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-11-2013, 12:10 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-12-2013, 11:21 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-15-2013, 06:09 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-23-2013, 05:42 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 06:35 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 08:35 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 03-30-2013, 11:54 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by brandontoh - 04-01-2013, 12:52 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 09:10 AM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 12:35 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-03-2013, 01:08 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by billy - 04-03-2013, 04:11 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-03-2013, 06:33 PM
RE: Poetry Chess 2: Todd vs Brandon - by Todd - 04-16-2013, 07:04 AM



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