Impossible
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(03-31-2013, 01:42 PM)trueenigma Wrote:  I feel like most of the lines were forced by the rhyme, you want to avoid writing things just to make them rhyme. "the dream within a dream". Lol plagiarizing the script for Inception?
It's a technically bad poem, I know. But it's to hard to revise, so I'll just leave it be for now, and focus on some of my other, better poems. But no, no copy, lol Smile I wrote it way before I saw the film Tongue
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Impossible - by Volaticus - 03-29-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: Impossible - by billy - 03-29-2013, 10:15 AM
RE: Impossible - by Volaticus - 03-30-2013, 01:18 AM
RE: Impossible - by Volaticus - 03-30-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: Impossible - by billy - 03-31-2013, 10:26 AM
RE: Impossible - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:34 AM
RE: Impossible - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 01:42 PM
RE: Impossible - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 11:46 PM



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