03-31-2013, 09:31 PM
milo-- I know you hate my abstractions, sorry! can't please everyone I guess. I'm more of the opinion that concrete images anchor the poem, not that they have to completely make it up.
trueenigma-- thanks for the comment. would you mind pointing out exactly where it felt wordy? I'm too involved and am having a hard time seeing where I can/should cut. thanks much.
trueenigma-- thanks for the comment. would you mind pointing out exactly where it felt wordy? I'm too involved and am having a hard time seeing where I can/should cut. thanks much.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.