03-31-2013, 04:31 PM
This is not bad, may need a couple more revisions, mostly to edit the punctuation, fix some of the abstactions and cliches, but for some reason the meter made it stick in my head.
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Split me open - by Tommy - 03-09-2013, 10:45 AM
RE: Split me open - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 11:02 AM
RE: Split me open - by newsclippings - 03-09-2013, 12:16 PM
RE: Split me open - by billy - 03-09-2013, 05:50 PM
RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-10-2013, 06:19 AM
RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 01:51 AM
RE: Split me open - by Michelle311 - 03-10-2013, 08:05 PM
RE: Split me open - by Jamie - 03-10-2013, 10:20 PM
RE: Split me open - by cidermaid - 03-10-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-11-2013, 12:50 AM
RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-11-2013, 06:03 AM
RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-11-2013, 03:01 PM
RE: Split me open - by escorial - 03-11-2013, 07:25 AM
RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-27-2013, 03:22 PM
RE: Split me open - by neena2504 - 03-28-2013, 12:37 AM
RE: Split me open - by saeity - 03-28-2013, 04:22 AM
RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 04:25 AM
RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-28-2013, 09:44 AM
RE: Split me open - by saeity - 03-28-2013, 09:53 AM
RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 10:15 AM
RE: Split me open - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 04:31 PM
RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-31-2013, 08:17 PM
RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 04-01-2013, 06:52 AM
RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 01:41 PM
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