Untitled haiku

Untitled haiku

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03-31-2013, 10:09 AM (This post was last modified: 03-31-2013, 10:12 AM by billy.)

(03-31-2013, 10:02 AM)Volaticus Wrote: This is my first attempt, so please bear with me :p

Decrepit woman,
Lifting sacks of the ample,
Cold is her splendor.

what is an ample Big Grin

we all started with a first attempt so don't worry Smile

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Untitled haiku - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:02 AM

RE: Untitled - by milo - 03-31-2013, 10:06 AM

RE: Untitled - by milo - 03-31-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Untitled - by billy - 03-31-2013, 10:09 AM

RE: Untitled - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: Untitled - by milo - 03-31-2013, 11:30 AM

RE: Untitled haiku - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 11:35 AM

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