03-31-2013, 10:06 AM
(03-31-2013, 10:02 AM)Volaticus Wrote: This is my first attempt, so please bear with me :pgenerally avoid any modification if you can. These depends on absolute perfect word choice so if you can distill, you do.
Decrepit woman,
Lifting sacks of the ample,
Cold is her splendor.
crone
lifts sacks
cold splendor
not a bad attempt though
milo

