03-31-2013, 04:37 AM
I've posted a rewrite of the poem, thanks to milo's invaluable advise. I tried really hard, so I hope I've improved it at least some. I think I did 
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"Are You Dreaming?" - by Volaticus - 03-30-2013, 09:04 AM
RE: "Are You Dreaming?" - by milo - 03-30-2013, 10:00 AM
RE: "Are You Dreaming?" - by Volaticus - 03-30-2013, 10:30 AM
RE: "Are You Dreaming?" - by milo - 03-30-2013, 10:52 AM
RE: "Are You Dreaming?" - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 01:07 AM
RE: "Are You Dreaming?" - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: "Are You Dreaming?" - by milo - 03-31-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: "Are You Dreaming?" - by Volaticus - 03-31-2013, 05:46 AM
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