03-30-2013, 08:33 AM
"Were you like me in a
Burton-Taylor situation,
you would be just as much exhausted as I am
by now. hey, what does this stanza mean?"
=
war of roses (Liz Taylor vs Dick Burton).
you recall: who's afraid of Virginia Woolf?
"I am encaged by
my drab fatal fate. to me this sounds like you're saying it in this monotonous uncaring voice. Is that the effect you're going for?"
These lines are just blabla. I ll omit them.
"But – to lighter-note my text -
I love the way the Christian Roman province Africa*
presented their holy hero to them and us:the people of Africa? their? there is a whoooole lot of people in Africa. perhaps you should pick a region, unless you're trying to generalize"
Roman Africa:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Africa_(Roman_province)
Thank you for looking into my abyss. It is appreciated.
"prone" troubles me too. I thought, it is elegant. Hm. I dunno.
I feel free now the day has gone.
swinging low sweet chariot.
http://youtu.be/HYbRwSjAir4
"swing low, sweet chariot
coming for to carry me home"
That simply cries for a Gurkski edit.
But now this very same Gurkski writes a porn poem titled: Nubian dancers, and I doubt he''ll care more about xtian bs howsoever nicely presented.
I mean the lyrics of this god spell are so DaDa, it is pretty hard for me
to not head-over-heels myself getting into them.
"Nothing to be proud about.
(But that's a lie: I was brilliant at times). You're talking to yourself, that's good."
This time: yes bc I pamper myself.
"late-antiquity Africa2"
should maybe rather:
The Roman province Africa
I think I ll go for that.
(ty for the input, news)
--------------------------
* thanks to newsclippings for valuable input here.
at newsclippings: instead of "prone" I use "will likely happen" now.
Thank you for your input.
cheers
Serge
Burton-Taylor situation,
you would be just as much exhausted as I am
by now. hey, what does this stanza mean?"
=
war of roses (Liz Taylor vs Dick Burton).
you recall: who's afraid of Virginia Woolf?
"I am encaged by
my drab fatal fate. to me this sounds like you're saying it in this monotonous uncaring voice. Is that the effect you're going for?"
These lines are just blabla. I ll omit them.
"But – to lighter-note my text -
I love the way the Christian Roman province Africa*
presented their holy hero to them and us:the people of Africa? their? there is a whoooole lot of people in Africa. perhaps you should pick a region, unless you're trying to generalize"
Roman Africa:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Africa_(Roman_province)
Thank you for looking into my abyss. It is appreciated.
"prone" troubles me too. I thought, it is elegant. Hm. I dunno.
I feel free now the day has gone.
swinging low sweet chariot.
http://youtu.be/HYbRwSjAir4
"swing low, sweet chariot
coming for to carry me home"
That simply cries for a Gurkski edit.
But now this very same Gurkski writes a porn poem titled: Nubian dancers, and I doubt he''ll care more about xtian bs howsoever nicely presented.
I mean the lyrics of this god spell are so DaDa, it is pretty hard for me
to not head-over-heels myself getting into them.
"Nothing to be proud about.
(But that's a lie: I was brilliant at times). You're talking to yourself, that's good."
This time: yes bc I pamper myself.
"late-antiquity Africa2"
should maybe rather:
The Roman province Africa
I think I ll go for that.
(ty for the input, news)
--------------------------
* thanks to newsclippings for valuable input here.
at newsclippings: instead of "prone" I use "will likely happen" now.
Thank you for your input.
cheers
Serge