What is this?
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I think you're right, that the poem would be missing a lot, if you only kept L1-L6. I definitely don't think you should delete the last part. But I think it needs some work, to make it fit better with the first part. Maybe someone, with more skill than I, could help you with that Smile
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What is this? - by checo456 - 03-30-2013, 02:08 AM
RE: What is this? - by Volaticus - 03-30-2013, 02:25 AM
RE: What is this? - by checo456 - 03-30-2013, 03:01 AM
RE: What is this? - by Volaticus - 03-30-2013, 03:23 AM
RE: What is this? - by checo456 - 03-30-2013, 03:50 AM
RE: What is this? - by Volaticus - 03-30-2013, 04:09 AM



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