Give chase [formerly: Gallop, bitch!]
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Firstly, GREAT title. Definitely an attention grabber. I enjoyed your poem a lot, it was simple yet effective in my mind. However, like someone else mentioned there were a few words I didn't quite get (but then again I don't ride horses so I don't know..?)

The use of the word "leash" makes me think more of a dog though.
Out of curiosity, what does "bay" mean?
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RE: Gallop, bitch! - by serge gurkski - 03-29-2013, 10:22 PM
RE: Gallop, bitch! - by justcloudy - 03-29-2013, 11:44 PM
RE: Gallop, bitch! - by serge gurkski - 03-30-2013, 01:51 AM
RE: Gallop, bitch! - by dandan - 03-30-2013, 01:49 AM
RE: Gallop, bitch! - by cidermaid - 03-30-2013, 04:38 AM
RE: Gallop, bitch! - by NakedBear - 03-30-2013, 02:44 PM



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