03-30-2013, 01:49 AM
Firstly, GREAT title. Definitely an attention grabber. I enjoyed your poem a lot, it was simple yet effective in my mind. However, like someone else mentioned there were a few words I didn't quite get (but then again I don't ride horses so I don't know..?)
The use of the word "leash" makes me think more of a dog though.
Out of curiosity, what does "bay" mean?
The use of the word "leash" makes me think more of a dog though.
Out of curiosity, what does "bay" mean?

