Relationships

[NakedBear]

This edit is very nice. I do have some suggestions, though. See below.

Edited:

Harbouring
relationships
upon the ocean
floor.

Beneath the frothing,
rolling waves
that pound my broken
core.

Polluted waters
sifting pain,
tear the hulls
apart.

Coursing wildly What is coursing? I fancy it's the polluted water, but grammatically there is no link being made. Maybe: 'It courses wildly'?
through my veins comma at end
leaves just a broken I don't think 'leaves' is grammatically correct, here. Maybe the line could be 'to leave a broken' , especially if you do put the comma on the line above. How important is 'just' to you?
heart.

I'm enjoying this piece.

Mikey.