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[dandan]

I read this. Then I read it again. Then I read it again...
Like worrying a wound, so it can never heal.
Raw. Brutal. Powerful. Tragic. True

I did the same. It's a beautiful poem.
the only suggestions I had where regarding where you break off but someone has already mentioned it. (It was about not breaking after "at" and "of"
ex. 'Behind the stop' and 'and rode bikes along shores'