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03-28-2013, 09:53 AM

(03-28-2013, 09:44 AM)Tommy Wrote: There once was a man split in two
Who thought what you should do,
Is look in there - if you dare
But you’d better beware
You’ll smell the stench of my despair!

How am I doing so far?

Okay I'll de-rhyme-ify it.

well.....
there once was a lady from Ealing
who had the most dreadful of feelings
she laid on her back
opened..

ah forgot not in the sewer Big Grin

Big Grin

saeity.

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Split me open - by Tommy - 03-09-2013, 10:45 AM

RE: Split me open - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 11:02 AM

RE: Split me open - by newsclippings - 03-09-2013, 12:16 PM

RE: Split me open - by billy - 03-09-2013, 05:50 PM

RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-10-2013, 06:19 AM

RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 01:51 AM

RE: Split me open - by Michelle311 - 03-10-2013, 08:05 PM

RE: Split me open - by Jamie - 03-10-2013, 10:20 PM

RE: Split me open - by cidermaid - 03-10-2013, 10:31 PM

RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-11-2013, 12:50 AM

RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-11-2013, 06:03 AM

RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-11-2013, 03:01 PM

RE: Split me open - by escorial - 03-11-2013, 07:25 AM

RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-27-2013, 03:22 PM

RE: Split me open - by neena2504 - 03-28-2013, 12:37 AM

RE: Split me open - by saeity - 03-28-2013, 04:22 AM

RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 04:25 AM

RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 03-28-2013, 09:44 AM

RE: Split me open - by saeity - 03-28-2013, 09:53 AM

RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 10:15 AM

RE: Split me open - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 04:31 PM

RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 03-31-2013, 08:17 PM

RE: Split me open - by Tommy - 04-01-2013, 06:52 AM

RE: Split me open - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 01:41 PM

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