03-27-2013, 06:57 AM
Mostly these just seem like loosely related lines piled one under the other. The rhymes don't work well. You should choose one of the poems to focus on, and see what suggestions you get.
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What i have written so far. - by Goneau - 03-25-2013, 01:18 PM
RE: What i have written so far. - by allykat727 - 03-26-2013, 12:17 PM
RE: What i have written so far. - by Goneau - 03-26-2013, 01:48 PM
RE: What i have written so far. - by rowens - 03-27-2013, 06:57 AM
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