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03-26-2013, 06:15 PM

(03-23-2013, 12:46 AM)Heartafire Wrote: moonless night
pin-point stars
pierce the sea

I like the play of pin-point and pierce. There's also something about moonless that lends a haunting quality.

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starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 03-23-2013, 12:46 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by softlyfalling - 03-23-2013, 04:01 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 03-23-2013, 12:59 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 03-24-2013, 12:22 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 03-26-2013, 06:43 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 03-26-2013, 11:51 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by milo - 03-31-2013, 05:46 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 10:10 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by lolo - 03-24-2013, 02:58 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Todd - 03-26-2013, 06:15 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Soaring Eagle - 03-31-2013, 03:22 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by trueenigma - 03-31-2013, 06:50 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 09:12 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 09:24 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 09:40 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by trueenigma - 04-01-2013, 11:00 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 10:06 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 10:08 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 10:18 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 11:10 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by trueenigma - 04-01-2013, 11:52 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 01:29 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-01-2013, 01:56 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by billy - 04-01-2013, 03:21 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by serge gurkski - 04-01-2013, 10:25 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 10:58 AM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Todd - 04-01-2013, 12:50 PM

RE: starry night (haiku) - by Heartafire - 04-03-2013, 09:30 AM

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