03-26-2013, 07:15 AM
tectak wrote :-
Farm yard kitchen, tea towel over sink, bacon sizzling,
tiny shoes have just brought in fresh eggs, Lovely. Ditch the rest and sell this stanza on its own.
she smiles at the whistling, looks up at the morning,
moments before the bomb slams through the roof.
So I had a go and have posted an alternate edit. Thanks TOMH
Farm yard kitchen, tea towel over sink, bacon sizzling,
tiny shoes have just brought in fresh eggs, Lovely. Ditch the rest and sell this stanza on its own.
she smiles at the whistling, looks up at the morning,
moments before the bomb slams through the roof.
So I had a go and have posted an alternate edit. Thanks TOMH
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out