The beautiful lies
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"Lies is what you give, lies is what I seek. Still the heart yearns, a word or two linger through the night and start to reek." The introduction to your poem to be honest was amazing. It caught my attention an made me want to continue with the rest of the poem
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The beautiful lies - by neena2504 - 03-21-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by rowens - 03-21-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by neena2504 - 03-21-2013, 10:36 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by rowens - 03-21-2013, 10:49 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by saeity - 03-21-2013, 11:47 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by neena2504 - 03-21-2013, 11:54 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by saeity - 03-22-2013, 12:04 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - by milo - 03-24-2013, 08:56 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by neena2504 - 03-25-2013, 04:26 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by milo - 03-26-2013, 07:14 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - by rowens - 03-24-2013, 11:50 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by NovaKaine - 03-26-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - by neena2504 - 03-28-2013, 12:17 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - by milo - 03-28-2013, 05:46 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - by billy - 03-26-2013, 08:09 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - by allykat727 - 03-26-2013, 11:47 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - 1st Edit - by neena2504 - 03-28-2013, 06:45 PM
RE: The beautiful lies - 1st Edit - by milo - 03-29-2013, 06:06 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - 1st Edit - by billy - 03-29-2013, 10:04 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - 1st Edit - by neena2504 - 04-01-2013, 02:56 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - 1st Edit - by milo - 04-01-2013, 03:12 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - 1st Edit - by neena2504 - 04-01-2013, 05:49 AM
RE: The beautiful lies - by tmanzano - 03-29-2013, 01:16 PM



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