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A Heavy Debt

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03-26-2013, 04:47 AM

I really liked this poem, and the feeling of it went straight to my heart.
L3; "When bones are poking throught the skin" and L10; "And even if we dont make contact today" Were my favourite lines in the poem. Thank you for the read. Smile

-Marte

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A Heavy Debt - by Medusa - 03-21-2013, 01:43 PM

RE: A Heavy Debt - by NakedBear - 03-21-2013, 02:13 PM

RE: A Heavy Debt - by neena2504 - 03-21-2013, 06:44 PM

RE: A Heavy Debt - by Medusa - 03-22-2013, 02:48 AM

RE: A Heavy Debt - by Todd - 03-22-2013, 04:42 AM

RE: A Heavy Debt - by BlackSeconds - 03-26-2013, 04:47 AM

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