Life, My Life

Life, My Life

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03-26-2013, 03:15 AM

Thanks for the share. I am new myself, and this is my first feedback. Nice poem.
I really enjoyed the last sentence of the poem; "My heart is cold just like December". Also I is beeing written with capital Wink

When I read it I wondered about your first sentence; "I watch, I watch my life pass me by", Mabe "I watch, I watch my life pass by", or "... I watch life pass me by"?

- Marte

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Life, My Life - by Culture - 03-24-2013, 12:43 AM

RE: Life, My Life - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 01:45 PM

RE: Life, My Life - by Culture - 03-25-2013, 05:26 AM

RE: Life, My Life - by milo - 03-25-2013, 09:24 AM

RE: Life, My Life - by Todd - 03-25-2013, 05:41 AM

RE: Life, My Life - by ThePoetStephen - 03-25-2013, 09:34 AM

RE: Life, My Life - by BlackSeconds - 03-26-2013, 03:15 AM

RE: Life, My Life - by NovaKaine - 03-26-2013, 05:02 AM

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