The hopes for tomorrow

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The hopes for tomorrow

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03-26-2013, 02:57 AM

Thank you for the feedback both of you! First poem i "put out there" (and it was a bit scary).
Oops, i fixed the typing error. thank you.
I will work more with this one and see try to improve it with some better rhymes. Mabe try some less literal rhymes to.

- Marte

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The hopes for tomorrow - by BlackSeconds - 03-17-2013, 02:43 AM

RE: The hopes for tomorrow - by Aphroditeny - 03-17-2013, 06:31 AM

RE: The hopes for tomorrow - by newsclippings - 03-17-2013, 08:23 AM

RE: The hopes for tomorrow - by BlackSeconds - 03-26-2013, 02:57 AM

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