03-25-2013, 11:07 AM
(03-25-2013, 10:41 AM)C.M.C. Wrote: It sounds good... really good actually! I know that this is critiquing and everyone is here to help each other out. But I feel a bit off using what others wrote. Writing may be an adventure that isn't done alone, and I get that. But still I feel better with me writing the majority of my work. I mean no harm and do not want to seem rude, and would like to thank you for your advice!if someone does a chop shop on your poem or even a rewrite. in general it's an example to show something. they?I aren't saying/asking you to use the words shown. we're saying, can you see the structure or image, can you do something that uses some of these aspects.