Are You Not Great?

[milo]

It sounds good... really good actually! I know that this is critiquing and everyone is here to help each other out. But I feel a bit off using what others wrote. Writing may be an adventure that isn't done alone, and I get that. But still I feel better with me writing the majority of my work. I mean no harm and do not want to seem rude, and would like to thank you for your advice!

If you saw what I did, I pretty much just trimmed words out of what you wrote. I was trying to show you how. Use what you wish, don't use the rest, like I said, the words were already there.

I have been writing some poems for more than ten years now and they still need work.
It is a process, don't be afraid to take out a machete.

milo