Are You Not Great?

[C.M.C.]

It sounds good... really good actually! I know that this is critiquing and everyone is here to help each other out. But I feel a bit off using what others wrote. Writing may be an adventure that isn't done alone, and I get that. But still I feel better with me writing the majority of my work. I mean no harm and do not want to seem rude, and would like to thank you for your advice!