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Are You Not Great?
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03-25-2013, 09:47 AM
Wow... I'm kind of disappointed. Even more now that I realize that the poem wasn't all that good myself. Oh well. I guess that's the point of critique. Thanks for the input Milo, much obliged, friend!
Scratch that. I can at least try to improve! Uploaded revised version!
"Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again." - C.S. Lewis
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Are You Not Great? - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by milo - 03-25-2013, 08:56 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 09:47 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by billy - 03-25-2013, 10:08 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 10:10 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by milo - 03-25-2013, 10:33 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 10:41 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by milo - 03-25-2013, 10:49 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 11:12 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by billy - 03-25-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by billy - 03-25-2013, 10:43 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 11:05 AM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by billy - 03-25-2013, 12:38 PM
RE: Are You Not Great? - by C.M.C. - 03-26-2013, 09:24 AM
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