Nothing at the center
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I really enjoyed the concept of this poem. It was very unique and different. I especially love this part. "It’s just a ring/It’s just a vow/And both are empty at the center./And how we talk around it,/this void we know so well." But I want to urge to ask why do you claim vows to be empty as well. I can see where it makes sense but just want to know your view. That's an interesting topic.
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Nothing at the center - by NakedBear - 03-22-2013, 03:40 PM
RE: Nothing at the center - by Leanne - 03-22-2013, 03:54 PM
RE: Nothing at the center - by NakedBear - 03-22-2013, 04:27 PM
RE: Nothing at the center - by Leanne - 03-22-2013, 04:28 PM
RE: Nothing at the center - by NakedBear - 03-22-2013, 05:02 PM
RE: Nothing at the center - by NakedBear - 03-23-2013, 03:48 PM
RE: Nothing at the center - by PeaceGirl Wilkins - 03-25-2013, 08:19 AM
RE: Nothing at the center - by NakedBear - 03-25-2013, 01:58 PM



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