As the Clock Ticks

[tectak]

First of all Tectak. I believe that you have a bit of a bias when reading my poem. Is poetry not for self expression, whether Christian, Jewish, Muslim, Hindi, Pagan? (Oh how the list goes on!) Even people with no religion can write poetry! When I say that "He" speaks in the poem, I don't necessarily think God speaks to me, but more so it is my views. When you say I lose my plot, did I? Or did I move on to another place in the story. I don't even see where you got that he was already out of the room. I'll admit it. You had me their with the forced rhyme. But it feels more that you are here to attack my beliefs than critique my poem. (P.S. - It's called a refrain. Repetition plays it's part in poetry as well.)

Nope. No ad hominem....comments on the poem only.
Belief is everyone's right and I have no axe to grind.
Best,
tectak
Re-assess me.