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As the Clock Ticks

As the Clock Ticks
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#11
03-24-2013, 09:55 PM
Darn semicolons and leavin' out words! Okay I made a few tiny edits so I think it's pretty good. But then again nothing is set in stone. Thank you all for helping me out!
"Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again." - C.S. Lewis
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As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-23-2013, 03:13 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by NakedBear - 03-23-2013, 05:22 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by softlyfalling - 03-23-2013, 09:32 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-23-2013, 10:31 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 12:03 AM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-24-2013, 01:06 AM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 01:30 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by smjafrulhassan - 03-24-2013, 03:03 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by Todd - 03-24-2013, 08:34 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by NakedBear - 03-24-2013, 04:36 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-24-2013, 09:55 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by tectak - 03-24-2013, 11:00 PM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by C.M.C. - 03-25-2013, 01:58 AM
RE: As the Clock Ticks - by tectak - 03-25-2013, 02:47 AM



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